Her!? OMG!
Did you make this for a girl?
Did you get laid with her? H3h3h3h3.
Not bad, the chopping is timed right. Beats are good (some offbeat could be better, even!).
You use a lot flanger effects. Try to reduce them next time. I don't say they are not cool, I'm saying they can be sutile.
Bass is good, too.
Total: 4.5/5 5/5